The 3D in this piece is really well done, and I like the uniqueness of the art style (it almost reminds me of Team Fortress 2). It almost looks like a plastic figurine. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for. It could use a little more color, though.
A background of some kind would have made this more pleasing to look at, as would fixing the point of view so that the model is in the center of the picture (or at least so that we can see the whole thing.
Overall, it's a nice model, but some mistakes were made in the model's presentation.
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This definitely looks like a burger, so that's good. The shading is decent and I like how the cheese folds and how the lettuce folds. But, it has a few problems.
The background fits with the font choice, but neither of them really fit with the burger. Most of the textures are good, but the bun looks odd to me. It looks like it's growing manly stubble. And while burgers are indeed quite manly, I wouldn't really want to eat one if it was growing a beard. It's also got some jagged edges on it.
Overall, It's good, but the bun and the background need work.
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i loved your review, really funny stuff XD
I really liked the style of this piece. It's cartoony, but it's dark. The color scheme stays consistent throughout the picture. I liked some of the little details that you added in (the spent shell casing, the hand-prints, the broken windows, etc.). The shotgun looks really nice too, and I like the exaggerated muzzle flash (and also how it reflects off the shotgun).
The only real complaint I have is that some of the hands look weird. But, I know that hands are a bitch to draw.
Overall, It's a great piece with a lot of style.
I've had plenty of practice before and after. To be honest... i jsut got lazy with the hands. Yeah, that ones on me...
Anyway, thanks for pointing it out how incredibly terribly terrible I can be.
Both of the main models look really good, as does the shading. I like the perspective of the piece, it's pretty unique. I like the way that the creature looks. The design of it looks like it flows and nothing about the creature seems out of place.
However, I think the ground texture is kind of unfitting. The texture itself is pretty low quality, and it just looks strange and empty. I think it would look better if it were grass, or at least had patches of grass. The background also looks too empty.
Overall, it looks good, but it needs some work.
sorry about the ground texture, I had it better before, but you could see lines
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